Main Character (Kid) Application Name: Kanaya Maryam. Sometimes referred to as Mary, but more often than not as a playful joke she doesn't particularly like Starter Pokémon: Nebilim the Sewaddle Hometown: Nacrene City Appearance: On the tall side, around 5' 7". About 17 years of age. Carries a change of clothes/shoes as well as her Pokemon supplies in case the situation calls for a different getup. Wears her Virgo tee and longsleeve black shirt with the red skirt on most occasions for travel, but switches to the Red Virgo dress in more elegant or intense situations. Biography: Grew up in Nacrene city for most of her life with Nebilim, designing and sewing different accessories for the people who lived there. Once she earned enough money through this small business and was of age, she left Unova to start a new career elsewhere and explore the rest of the world with Nebilim. Personality: Very friendly. Usually pleasant in conversation but often becomes snarky and sarcastic. Prefers not to battle, but will not be very lenient if provoked to fight; not afraid to get her hands dirty. Goal: Kanaya's dream is to spread her designs throughout the world, basing her clothing off of scenery and people she meets along her journey. Dreams of someday winning the title of top coordinator in the Grand Festival.
(hope this is okay; I haven't drawn anything for her yet kcfjdvjadbkvbkdsvb i might idk if i need to or what but here okay gr8 c: Let me know if I need to add anything or whatnot)
Although what you have is fine, this is a very short app! Need a lot more expansion on personality to be accepted. Perhaps look at our previous Kanaya's app for inspiration? It doesn't need to be nearly THAT wordy, but it may give you ideas. You could also try her wiki page!
Rejected for now, but do feel free to re-apply with a longer app, if you want!