Application: Jane Crocker. :B

[creamycupcake]

• Character: Jane Crocker
• Profession: Baker
• Starter Pokémon: Buneary (Lil' Sebastian)
• Hometown: Pallet Town
• Description of personality: Jane often tries to stay positive, even if it's not so easy.
She always thinks through her alternatives before making a decision. Jane listens to her friends, even if she do not always believes it.... She sometimes(Very often) get into trouble because of her restless buneary, Lil' Sebastian. When she is feeling a little depressed or sad, she tries to lighten her mood with baking. She also bakes things for her friends if they're feeling a little down or if she wants to congratulate them for something. Actually Jane bakes whenever she feels like it.


(Okay, there it is ouo If it's any grammar fails or typos or if I used a word wrong, please tell me ;o;(And oOPS I hope it's not too short sdfafgsg))

[Kat]

There are a few grammar problems here: "even if she do not always believes it" should be "even though she does not always believe it" and "She sometimes(Very often) get into trouble" should be "She sometimes (very often) gets into trouble".

However, your characterisation is good and I'd like to accept you anyway, especially because we want to be inclusive to people when English isn't their first language. If you like, I don't mind proofreading your posts, etc =)