Rose application

[Application for Rose]

Main Character Application
• Character: Rose Lalonde
• Profession: Trainer
• Starter Pokémon: Abra
• Hometown: Pallettown
• Brief description of personality: Is rather blunt, uses big words to confuse people and is very logical. Enjoys reading, her friends and playing with her Skitty that her family gave her after she got her Abra, playing with her Abra, and psychoanalyzing. Dislikes people who don't talk about the things that interests her.

[Kat]

Looks promising, but could you maybe write a bit more? (And in full sentences, eg: "Rose is rather blunt...) Just so we have a slightly better idea of how you play her.

[Application for Rose 2]

Here's the redo then. Sorry for it being short and kinda messy the first time.

Main Character Application
• Character: Rose Lalonde
• Profession: Trainer
• Starter Pokémon: Abra
• Hometown: Pallettown
• Brief description of personality:Rose is rather blunt, uses big words to confuse people and is very logical. She acts stoic most of the time and finds enjoyment in baiting Dave. She enjoys reading, her friends, playing with the Skitty that her family gave her after she got her Abra, playing with her Abra, and psychoanalyzing. Dislikes people who don't talk about the things that interests her, losing, and people bragging.